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Chapter One: Genesis

Erin: ok hello everyone I want to let you knwo that I'm the BIGGEST Twilight ever! I've read all the boks and seen da movie -OMFG isn't Cullin HAWT. So hot. ok now iv writon a storie about wut wold happen id I were bella1 Because shes a dirte bithc so i want you to see it and tel moi what you think!! So LOTS OF REVOWS PLZ! lov you God xoxoxoxo

I hud to put my storie up hear becose the meenies at FF.net deleated it but I am glad the Jew and the Bird are gone and aint flaming me anymore

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I walked into the room and HE waz siting over by the coner of my english class, prefectly sitting by the corner in a desk. I thought he was a god (Erin: not god God because I luv god and thats blamsphemi, so fuc off sinars) becoz he looked so darmn hot, like that guy who used to be on Smalvile befor he got fat so now I watch supernatural becoz fat man is always in my head now.

I giglied when he lookd at mwah and Edwards looked away seeming to snarlingly. I flacked my long brown hare hoppping to git his atention. I hav long brown hair that reatches my btomm, in a smooth long thing with a hairclip and such. I have hotr eyeliner with lots of blue mascara becoz it goes with moi eyes you see becoz they are blu. and i'm wearing a loose wite blows with a cute leather belt and a long black skirt becoz its sexy but not whory and its a sin to be a whor tunles ur Mary Magdalin, but shes daed anyway.

Edward looked back to me and loked away agin. It was rood and I farroed my brow confusedly at hymn, but decided but hes sex-ah so Ill let him get away with it (The Lord teeches us to forgave).

I walked over, with evry eye on the room on me because Im so darmn H-O-T (I've been told this mnay times so I know it is true( and i sit on his desk and he looks up and has bronze eyes that are sexy in a brewding way (erin: FORSHADOWING!! He is brewdy but if you havnt reed the boks you'd already no that!)

He looks up to me and I look dwn to him loking up to me. He then speaks, in a quiet brewding voice.

"Who are you?" he aks and why are you on my desk?

So i winks at him and tell him he's cute, but then class starts and i sit down and watch him.

He is so hot and I dcide want to be his boyfriend. He looks at me and turns away agin.

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So yeeeeeeeah thats my storie tell me what you hink with your revieows! so glad to have writing it i'm happi ass now! GOD LOVES YOU ALL! XOXOXOXOXO! :3
this is mi story were me n EDWARD CULLEN fight the eval Jomes and stuff. I Luv Twilight and EDWARD is the HOTEST EVA
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:iconarabascan:
I hope that this is a parody. If not, it is one of the biggest insults to the hundreds and thousands of years humanity put into evolving a language I saw so far.
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TheThirdReviewer Aug 8, 2013   General Artist
You are so hung up on blasphemy and yet you watch Supernatural. How does that factor in to your precious Jesus-freak sensibilities?
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MidnightShadows24 Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hell no. I refuse to believe that Erin watches Supernatural. :iconthrowplz:
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TheThirdReviewer Aug 11, 2013   General Artist
Understandable.
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raelooo Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
holy fuck
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Surgeon-Scone Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
12,472 views as of this post.

Why...

Dear God, why...
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:iconthethirdreviewer:
TheThirdReviewer Aug 8, 2013   General Artist
She's funny. And the comments are gold.
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Surgeon-Scone Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
But... the horror...
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TheThirdReviewer Aug 11, 2013   General Artist
i know right
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wisedomsdaughter May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think that instead of ignoring all the flames you get, maybe you should take some of the suggestions in the reviews and apply it to your writing. That way, you will improve.
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